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Lael; my character
Topic Started: Oct 22 2006, 03:21 PM (227 Views)
Lael
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B]Name[/B]: Lael

Age: 15

Birthday: Early Summer

Gender: female

Job/Specialty: underage...works at her family's farm and trains the horses

Race: human

Hair: long and black

Eyes: oval shaped and gray colored

Body: small but strong stature

Home Village: Used to live at Farthen Dur but was forced to move to Surda in the war.

Varden or Empire: Varden

Parents: Lee and Shara...father works as a blacksmith...mother, uncle, and uncle's wife work as horsebreeders

Siblings: one younger brother named Anton

Character Personality: She doesn't believe in self-pity (or any kind of pity to tell you the truth) and she absolutely hate people who pamper women. Lael's very strong willed, and not one to stand behind when a need arises. Though she's never had the oppurtunity to prove herself, she is just waiting because she know it will come someday.

Character History: Under the protection of the Varden, her family had lived in Farthen Dur since the fall of the Riders. A year ago, they were forced to move to Surda for their protection. Her mother, father, herself, and her younger brother built a house in this almost unbearably hot country, and shortly afterward, her grandmother, her uncle, and his pregnant wife moved in. Lael's father and her uncle fought in the Battle of the Burning Plains, but neither of them were injured. And for that she is thankful. Live has been hectic since Eragon Shadeslayer arrived, and she hates to put all of her trust into a boy that's barely older than herself, but she has no choice. Lael wishes she could do something...make a change in the world...or at least stand up and fight.

Character's good personality traits: Lael is a good honest and strong-willed girl. She works hard and knows when to keep her mouth shut. Though she loves to get out and walk on the wild side once in a while. She is known to dress up as a boy just so she can go out without having people look down upon her.

Character's bad personality traits: She gets emotional when people tell her that she's no good. Lael gets angry, and then she doesn't think straight. It's led her into trouble many a time. And with war going on with the Empire, she's afraid for her family. She loves them too much for them to be harmed.

Weapons: Lael's has a handmade bow stored carefully in a buckskin tube in her room. She takes good care of it, since her uncle hand-made it for her and it's never failed her yet. And since her family moved to Surda, she's carried a rather plain but effective knife around with her wherever she goes. It's not much, but she's proud of it because she bought it with her own pocket money.

Likes: Lael loves to eat pasta and loves to read. She also likes riding bareback in the field behind her house and taking long walks.

Dislikes: Lael dislikes small spaces, partially because she's claustophobic and partially becuase she can't see the endless sky and the fields around her. Though, her biggest pet peeve is people who think girls aren't capable of taking care of themselves. And she is willing to disprove that theory.

Animal Companions: Lael has a large dog named Molly who follows her everywhere. Molly has a short snout and thick brown fur, but she is one of the sweetest creatures one will ever meet. Lael also loves the horses her family raises, especially Riverstone, a dappled gray mare.

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc): She is a small person, in fact she's barely over five feet. But she otherwise likes her appearance. Lael's mother and herself look nothing alike, but she's accquired most of her father's traits. Like him, Lael has strong cheekbones, a bright smile, a small nose, and oval gray eyes. She also looks a bit like his mother (her grandmother), for she has a small stature, small quick hands, and long black hair. She's also quite strong for her size, and her aunt admires the muscles she's develeped since she started shooting archery. And since her family moved to Surda, Lael's skin has tanned and it no longer burns easily. Though she still has her ugly freckles. Her clothing is mostly whatever her family can afford to make, really. Mostly it's a plain white tunic and a brown skirt with a leather belt, but since the Varden started making lace in large quantities, women around there have been wearing a lot more of it. She doesn't really care for it, to tell you the truth. In fact, Lael's been known to dress like a boy so as to get some pocket money for food. It's not much, just a pair of worn riding jodhpurs, an old shirt of her father's, and a cap to hide her hair.

Dreams for the Future: Lael's not really sure what her future holds for her, but one thing for sure, she refuses to let it take control of her. Her biggest dream is that maybe she can help save the world somehow.

Reason for Dreams: Lael dreams of a better place, where her family can be happy and healthy without the threat of war. She also dreams of being a hero, instead of the poor farm girl she really is.

Important things character has forgotten: Lael learned a lot of dragonlore when she was younger, but she has forgotten most of it in the midst of the War.

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Eryn
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The Harbinger of War
It's very good. It has lots of detail as well. Just a reminder: all the actual roleplaying is done in third person.
Dark and Powerful and Wise is He,
Destroyed All Evil and Set Good Free,

Astride his Dark Dragon He Will Fight,
For Victory and Justice will be saught tonight,

His sword swift and razor sharp,
Yet His Heart Is Pure and Makes the Women Harp,

Dark Flames Can His Dragon Sear,
Those Who Oppose Him live in fear,

Dark and Powerful and Wise Is He,
Destroyed all Evil and Set Good Free.

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Lael
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I re-did it in third person. I also did it to the form suggested in the character creating topic. :banana:
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Eryn
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The Harbinger of War
Even better! Yaaay!
Dark and Powerful and Wise is He,
Destroyed All Evil and Set Good Free,

Astride his Dark Dragon He Will Fight,
For Victory and Justice will be saught tonight,

His sword swift and razor sharp,
Yet His Heart Is Pure and Makes the Women Harp,

Dark Flames Can His Dragon Sear,
Those Who Oppose Him live in fear,

Dark and Powerful and Wise Is He,
Destroyed all Evil and Set Good Free.

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Du Edoc'sil Ebrithil
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Let the sky burn.
Nice...very descriptive...always good to see new comers who actually know what they're doing good job.
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He acts as his conscience directs him with little regard for what others expect of him. He makes his own way, but he’s kind and benevolent. He believes in goodness and right, but has little use for laws and regulations. He follows his own moral compass, which, although good, may not agree with that of society.
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Eryn
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Exactly.
Dark and Powerful and Wise is He,
Destroyed All Evil and Set Good Free,

Astride his Dark Dragon He Will Fight,
For Victory and Justice will be saught tonight,

His sword swift and razor sharp,
Yet His Heart Is Pure and Makes the Women Harp,

Dark Flames Can His Dragon Sear,
Those Who Oppose Him live in fear,

Dark and Powerful and Wise Is He,
Destroyed all Evil and Set Good Free.

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Airyanna Rose
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Very nice. You can do a lot with this character. I'm impressed. :D
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Nice, nice.
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